The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides information about the
number
of people who smoked cigarettes over a 10-year period in the UK.
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Overall
, the bar chart illustrates that the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
smokers
declined gradually from 2011 to 2021, Use synonyms
although
more men were addicted to Linking Words
this
habit compared to women.
In 2011, approximately 4 Linking Words
million
men smoked, compared to about 3.5 Use synonyms
million
women. Over the years, the figures for both genders steadily decreased. By 2021, the Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
smokers
had dropped to slightly above 1 Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of female Use synonyms
smokers
fell to just below 3 Use synonyms
million
. The most notable decline occurred between 2015 and 2021.
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By comparison
, the Linking Words
overall
Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
smokers
reduced significantly, becoming much lower by the end of the period than at the beginning. The decline was more consistent for men, with steady reductions throughout the years. Women, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, saw a slower decrease from 2011 to 2015. Linking Words
This
trend suggests a broader societal shift away from smoking, possibly Linking Words
due to
increased awareness of health risks.Linking Words
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