The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AIDA

The bar chart provides information on the number of

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and women who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.

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,the bar graph illustrates how the number of smoking cigarettes declined in ten years.

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,males smoked more than females.

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,they both went down in decades. In 2011, around 3.5

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men

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smoked, compared to roughly 2

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women.

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gap remained throughout the entire period. By 2021, the number of male smokers had fallen to just under 2

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female smokers declined to about 1

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. The data shows a general downward trend in cigarette consumption for both genders.

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men

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consistently had higher smoking rates, the decline was noticeable for both

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,especially after 2016.

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, cigarette smoking in the UK decreased significantly between 2011 and 2021, with

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always having higher numbers than women.