The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts represent data
of
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population
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the population
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divided
in
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categories of ages in
Yemen
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and Italy in 2002 and give predictions for 2050.
Overall
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, the biggest
fractions
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fraction
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through these two
years
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seems to be a
population
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from 15-59
years
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.
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, in the case of
Italy
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Italy,
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this
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category is expected to decrease,
while
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in
Yemen
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the opposite of it. In 2000 the age of 60
years
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and above presented a tiny fraction (3.6%) of the whole
population
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in
Yemen
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,
while
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in Italy
this
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group
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was just under a quarter (24.3%). The next
group
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, people between 15 and 59
years
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, represented a large proportion in both countries with 61.6% and 46.3%, respectively. Compared to
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, the youngest
group
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, from 0 to 14
years
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, showed completely different shares in the case of
Yemen
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and Italy.
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in
Yemen
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the proportion of
this
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group
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is a bit above
a
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half (50.1%), in the case of Italy
this
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number was less than a fifth. These numbers will have changed, more or less, by 2050. In
Yemen
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, the
group
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of people from 15 to 59, will overtake the leading position from the oldest
group
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, and remain on the first rank with numbers more than a half (57.3%).
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, the elders will be on the second rank with 37%, and the youngest
group
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will
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a little increase from 3.6% to 5.7%.
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, Italy is more likely to
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the opposite situation.
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the
population
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of 60
years
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and above will
show
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almost double growth (from ___ to 42.3%), the other two categories of 0-14 and 15-59
years
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will decrease and are predicted to
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proportions of 11.5% and 46.2%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, yemen, years, group, show with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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