The chart below describes the production of wheat by 5 countries in 2012 and 2020. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below describes the production of wheat by 5 countries in 2012 and 2020. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table chart illustrates the production of
wheat
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, Barley, Maize and Rice by 5 countries in 2012 and 2020.
Overall
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, the four categories experienced different times in the same period, Despite
this
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, it is crystal clear that
wheat
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was the largest producer, in
opposite
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the opposite
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way, Rice was
the
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apply
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much less than
wheat
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. As the graph shows all the sources started in 2010.
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wheat
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began at 100 in 2010 and
then
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steadily increased to 110 in 2030,
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moreover
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moreover,
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Barley decreased the half of
wheal
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wheat
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it started at 50 in 2010
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rose to 70 gains in 2015 after that in all years become steadily increased by about 10, and finished in 2030 by 100. Regarding maize at first 3 years are stable by 34,5 but in 2025 will rise a half and
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stabilise again in 2030. What's more, the rise is not stable which in 2010 became 24,7
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in 2015 decreased slightly by 0,3 after that stable at 25 in 2030. In conclusion, the table shows all the information resources and
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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