The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the data on the police budget
in
which the Change preposition
from
money
came Use synonyms
from
and the two pie charts describe the distribution of the amount of Change preposition
apply
money
in the two Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
year
2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, there was an upward trend in all three different sources Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
money
spent on salaries was always the majority of contribution.
Looking into more details, the highest amount of Use synonyms
money
on the police budget belonged to Use synonyms
‘National
Government’, 175.5 Correct your spelling
the national
million
Use synonyms
pounds
in 2017 and it kept rising to 177.8 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
pounds
. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Thus
was followed by ‘Local Taxes’, at 91.2 Correct your spelling
This
million
Use synonyms
pounds
in 2017, after one year, it Use synonyms
increase
significantly to 102.3 Wrong verb form
increased
million
Use synonyms
pounds
.
In Use synonyms
term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
the
how the Correct article usage
apply
money
was spent, the majority of Use synonyms
police
budget goes to salaries which was for officers and staff, dropping slightly from 75% in 2017 to 69% in 2018. Meanwhile, the proportion of ‘Buildings and transport’ remained Correct article usage
the police
constantly
, at 17% each year. An opposite pattern can be seen in the category of technology, its figure rose sharply from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018, which was always the lowest rate during the given period.Change the word
constant
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, million, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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