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The pie charts below show unites of electricity production by fuel sources in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show unites of electricity production by fuel sources in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts compare data about generating
power
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 from 5 various resources namely, fossil fuels, hydro, and nuclear in
Australia
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 and
France
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 at 2 points in time, 1980 and 2000.
Overall
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, it was important that the amount of Coal and Hydropower in
Australia
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, which did not have Nuclear
power
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 , Oil and Nuclear
power
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 in
France
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 increased over the period of 2 decades.
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 the diagram, in
Australia
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, the total energy that was produced climbed from 100 units in 1980 to 170 Unite in 2000.
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, the usage of resources like Natural gas and Oil reduced from respectively 20 and 10 in 1980 to the same number as 2 in 2000. Coal, the main source of electricity at both times, composed 50 in the beginning;
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, it climbed to 130 in 2000;
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, hydropower constituted 20 in 1980;
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 it rose to 36 in 2000. The graphs demonstrate that
France
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's total production like
Australia
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 climbed from 90 units in 1980 to 180 units in 2000.
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,
France
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 was the same as
Australia
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 the score of Natural gas declined from 25 in 1980 to 2 in 1990. Hydro
power
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 made up 5 in 1980 and after that, it decreased to the same number as gas. coal score stabilized at 25, yet Nuclear and Oil climbed from 15 and 20 at the start, to 126 and 25 in 2000.
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