The line graph shows male and female gym membership over a thirty-year period. The vertical axis represents the number of members in units of 1000. The horizontal axis represents the period from 1980 to 2010
The line graph illustrates how many memberships were bought by different genders between 1970 and 2010.
Overall
, the results are very moderate, as there is a low correlation between these two groups.
To start with, at the beginning of the observing period, the number of male cards registered peaked at just above 4000 units for the first group and only about 2000 for the latter. Linking Words
Then
, women started acquiring more sports services, until it Linking Words
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up with another gender in the 1990s. Correct your spelling
caught
Besides
, in 1995, females reached their peak, Linking Words
while
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sports purchases decreased to 1800 only.
In the new century, the situation one more time changed because the male rate collapsed, Fix the agreement mistake
gentlemen`s
while
women's memberships kept fluctuating between 1900 and 3000 units. Interestingly, in 2005, 5000 fitness cards were purchased by men, making up the maximum of the period. Linking Words
However
, just after that, the indication sharply decreased to historical minimums by 2010. Linking Words
Thus
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although
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firstly
men were primary gym users, by 2010 women's membership accounted for just under 2000 units and men's was close to 1000.
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To sum up
, Linking Words
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results fluctuated more than another gender'sFix the agreement mistake
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ones
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
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while
the greatest amount of time male cards prevailed over females, the situation is the opposite in the end.Linking Words
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