Urban environments become unhealthy provide causes it possible solutions

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people

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(are) getting more and more concerned about

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environment

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. In

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will share the reasons and my thoughts on the subject.

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, it is air pollution.

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, there are a lot of factories,

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that affect

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our

health

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. But the main problem is that

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continues to be built, so we will simply destroy our planet.

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we have traffic jams, which translates into a large spread of exhaust gases from cars. To address it,

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would suggest

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about

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and

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of

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, and maybe

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not to

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more factories and use

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cars. Or in the

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we will replace it with something more useful.

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, a significant issue emerges in the field of

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problem

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. There is a risk, that

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stand more

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lazy

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because they can not go to the trash can to throw out the trash, or put it in

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their pocket , unless there is no trash can, and throw it away later. To tackle

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problem,

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would suggest

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people

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to not be lazy,

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think about our and

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planet

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. Or the government may introduce a new law “

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you throw out garbage in the wrong place, you will pay money for it”. In

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would like to stress, that

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hold

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a significant appeal for

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. Because the

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and life of every person,

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the future, depends on it. Nowadays we should do anything to save our planet.