You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The maps illustrate a small
town
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near Melbourne called Tarantula and how it developed over three different years 1990, 1950 and 2000.
Overall
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, the
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is thin located in the countryside and has a river on the western
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of the
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and
also
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a main
road
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across the central
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.
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, Tarantula had agricultural areas that it converted to unused and wildlife sanctuary areas. In 1900, Tarantula had orange farms in the north part of the
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and remained the same in 1950. A
town
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area
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, where people lived and gathered, located in the centre of the
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and across the main
road
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in the south part of the
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area
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,
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, the space of the
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area
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expanded in 1950 and the space decreased more in 2000. A mandarin trees farm transferred to an orange farm on the southern
side
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of
town
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,
while
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on the northeast
side
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of the
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on
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empty land constructed two buildings one of these buildings used for packing sheds and it was built an additional
road
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between them for cars and tracks that
road
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was passing through the northeast to the southeast of the
town
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in 1950. A dairy farm in the northwest expanded and converted into a lemons and grapefruits region in 1950. All orange fields were unused anymore and the space for both the
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area
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and the orange field in the south decreased in 2000. The lemons and grapes field replaced into a wildlife sanctuary.
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, the two buildings were converted into a local museum on the left
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and a craft market on the right,
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the smallest one was opened for a tourist shop and all tracks were banned from interring the additional
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because
this
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area
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became a residential
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in 2002.
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a new park set up in the southern part of the
town
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, side, road, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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