You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The maps illustrate a small
town
near Melbourne called Tarantula and how it developed over three different years 1990, 1950 and 2000.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
town
is thin located in the countryside and has a river on the western Use synonyms
side
of the Use synonyms
town
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also
a main Linking Words
road
across the central Use synonyms
town
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However
, Tarantula had agricultural areas that it converted to unused and wildlife sanctuary areas.
In 1900, Tarantula had orange farms in the north part of the Linking Words
town
and remained the same in 1950. A Use synonyms
town
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area
, where people lived and gathered, located in the centre of the Use synonyms
town
and across the main Use synonyms
road
in the south part of the Use synonyms
town
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area
, Use synonyms
however
, the space of the Linking Words
town
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area
expanded in 1950 and the space decreased more in 2000. A mandarin trees farm transferred to an orange farm on the southern Use synonyms
side
of Use synonyms
town
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while
on the northeast Linking Words
side
of the Use synonyms
town
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on
empty land constructed two buildings one of these buildings used for packing sheds and it was built an additional Correct word choice
apply
road
between them for cars and tracks that Use synonyms
road
was passing through the northeast to the southeast of the Use synonyms
town
in 1950. A dairy farm in the northwest expanded and converted into a lemons and grapefruits region in 1950.
All orange fields were unused anymore and the space for both the Use synonyms
town
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area
and the orange field in the south decreased in 2000. The lemons and grapes field replaced into a wildlife sanctuary. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the two buildings were converted into a local museum on the left Linking Words
side
and a craft market on the right, Use synonyms
while
the smallest one was opened for a tourist shop and all tracks were banned from interring the additional Linking Words
road
because Use synonyms
this
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area
became a residential Use synonyms
area
in 2002. Use synonyms
Along with
a new park set up in the southern part of the Linking Words
town
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, side, road, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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