You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

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Dear Preet, How are you? I hope you are doing well ! I am writing
this
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letter to ask
from
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apply
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you
some
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about some
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entertainment
placese
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places
where you spent
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last
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the last
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four years. Currently, I am doing work in
travel
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a travel
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company as
a
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an
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Accountant. Yesterday, I
recived
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received
email
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an email
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from my manager to attend
meeting
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a meeting
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in Jaipur. So, I am going to Jaipur next week. I
am
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was
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over the moon when I
hear
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heard
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that our company will cover my all tour expenses and I will live in The Kingfisher
hotel
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Hotel
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, even
meeting
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will
also
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held in the same hotel. It is the
famous
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most famous
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hotel
of
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in
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the city. I remember you told me so many good things about
this
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city like pub music,
handmade
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and handmade
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arts and crafts, when you did study in
the
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apply
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Jaipur
university
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University
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. Please suggest
me
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to me
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some entertainment places where I could enjoy my evening with
mates
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my mates
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you! Warm Regards, Harpreet
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task achievement
You could elaborate on your planned activities in Jaipur to enhance task completion.
coherence cohesion
Consider checking small grammatical errors to improve coherence.
greeting and closing
The letter features a warm and appropriate greeting and closing.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.
logical structure
The letter is well-organized into paragraphs with a clear purpose in each.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to inform you that
  • I am excited to announce that
  • I have decided to visit the town where you went to university because
  • I have always been curious about the town, and I thought it would be a great opportunity to explore it
  • I have booked a room at a hotel called
  • I will be staying in the town from
  • I am wondering if you could recommend any
  • fun activities
  • entertainment options
  • popular places to visit
  • restaurants
  • bars
  • clubs
  • concert venues
  • I am particularly interested in
  • local live music performances
  • cultural events
  • art galleries
  • theater shows
  • I would greatly appreciate your suggestions
  • Thank you in advance for your help
  • I am looking forward to hearing from you
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