The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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presents
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how
energy
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is used in
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general household and the greenhouse gas emissions in Australia respectively.
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between
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house
energy
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used in Australia, heating
energy
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was the
most
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highest. But despite the percentage of uses, the greenhouse gas
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emission
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emissions
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was
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very low.
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contrary
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, the proportion of refrigeration
energy
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that
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spent in the household was low, but the
emission
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that they were making was double times big. The
most
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highest
energy
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that Australian
household
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households
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use was heating, which was 42% followed by water heating less than about 10%. Other
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appliances
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used 15% and refrigeration and cooling and lighting
energy
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was spent less than 10%, which was 7%, 4% and 2% each. Despite the huge use of heating
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energy
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the greenhouse gas
emission
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was very little. It was not even half of the
energy
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that heating made. In
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of Water heating the
emission
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that it made was approximately
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the same
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proportion as the
energy
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it made, which was 32%. In opposite,
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the rest
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of the
energy
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such
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as Other appliances and refrigeration and cooling and lighting
energy
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made more
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emission
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emissions
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than they were spent by Australians.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emission with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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