Some people believe that public buildings should be moved out of the city, while some argue that the planning will cause more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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some

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are of the view that public

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must be shifted to

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away from the

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, others believe that doing so is not beneficial. I support that latter perspective because moving all the public estates to more rural and town

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, will surely pose a harm to the natural habitat breeding there. On the one hand, schools, government

offices

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and theatres situated in the urban

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are raising certain concerns.

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, a lot of

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living on the outskirts of the

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travel to the

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for education, employment and re-creation.

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leads to

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number of vehicles and

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severe

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jams.

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daily

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blocks cause long delays for

peole

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people

to reach their desired destinations.

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,

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of all government and private

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being present in the hearts of

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Mumbai

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, a large amount of public daily commutes from nearby suburban and rural

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for their work, causing huge

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jams in the

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.

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all workers get stranded for long hours and report to their duties late. Eventually, they get reprimanded by their bosses.

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some

people

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argue that to alleviate

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problem,

offices

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, educational and other public

buildings

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should be moved out of the

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. Opposingly, relocating

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public places to other

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will pose serious threats. One of the major

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is the increase in air and noise pollution levels

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more vehicles in

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areas

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which are still unaffected.

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, moving public

building

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buildings

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will necessitate constructing new ones which

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cutting down trees and forest lands. Ultimately,

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will cause

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humungous damage to the beautiful flora and fauna which have been preserved with great effort by the authorities. For illustration, many villages in Maharashtra which were earlier untouched by pollution

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now

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reduced quality of air

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reduced forest

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for building

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are industries.

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, I personally feel that relocation of

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buildings

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to other

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apart from the

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has the potential

of causing

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more harm than

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benefits. To summarize,

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a group of

people

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thinks that schools,

offices

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and other public

buildings

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must be shifted out of the

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due to

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increased

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issue of

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traffic

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in the urban

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, I feel that

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has detrimental side effects on the

well preserved

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environment in the towns and villages.