The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration gives information about two proposed placements (S1 and S2) for a new shopping centre to be built in a city named Brandfield.
Overall
, S1 lies north of the city, adjacent to the housing estate of Brandfield, Linking Words
while
S2 is located southeast, closer to the industrial estate.
S1 as the first potential building site has access to the railway, which passes south of it, Linking Words
as well as
to the road network covering the northern and western sides around S1. The river passing through Brandfield marks the eastern border of S1.
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In contrast
, the second proposed location, S2, Linking Words
while
having access to Linking Words
both
the railway system from the east and the road network spanning all around the north and the south, lacks a view of the river. Comparing the proximity of Use synonyms
both
sites to the city centre, it can be noted that S2 is Use synonyms
further
away. When discussing Linking Words
both
locations in relation to the golf centre and park, they Use synonyms
both
offer Use synonyms
approximitely
the same proximity.Correct your spelling
approximately
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