The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration gives information about two proposed placements (S1 and S2) for a new shopping centre to be built in a city named Brandfield.
Overall
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, S1 lies north of the city, adjacent to the housing estate of Brandfield,
while
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S2 is located southeast, closer to the industrial estate. S1 as the first potential building site has access to the railway, which passes south of it,
as well as
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to the road network covering the northern and western sides around S1. The river passing through Brandfield marks the eastern border of S1.
In contrast
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, the second proposed location, S2,
while
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having access to
both
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the railway system from the east and the road network spanning all around the north and the south, lacks a view of the river. Comparing the proximity of
both
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sites to the city centre, it can be noted that S2 is
further
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away. When discussing
both
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locations in relation to the golf centre and park, they
both
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offer
approximitely
Correct your spelling
approximately
the same proximity.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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