The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now.
The displayed map depicts a
park
and its changes between 1980 and the current Use synonyms
time
.
As an overview, the Use synonyms
park
has dramatically changed over the given period of Use synonyms
time
.
In 1980, there were two gates, the first located on the left side of the Use synonyms
park
, and Use synonyms
while
second Linking Words
in
the lower side of the map. Both on the left and right sides of the lower gatesChange preposition
on
,
are situated flowers, Remove the comma
apply
while
at the top of the Linking Words
park
, there are trees.
Use synonyms
However
, at the current Linking Words
time
, the main change is that gates and road have been replaced by Use synonyms
path
, Correct article usage
a path
beside
that, at the right top of the Replace the word
besides
park
, chairs, desks and a barbecue appeared. Use synonyms
While
at the left side, there is one more branch. At the same Linking Words
time
, at the bottom two flower gardens were replaced by bushes and Use synonyms
playground
.Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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