The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The diagram illustrates the process of extracting
clay
and its subsequent use in producing Use synonyms
bricks
for construction purposes.
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Overall
, brick production consists of seven main stages, starting with the mining of Linking Words
clay
and concluding with the packaging of the final products and their distribution to consumers.
The process begins with the excavation of Use synonyms
clay
using a digger. The extracted Use synonyms
clay
is Use synonyms
then
placed into a metal grid and passed through a roller, where sand and water are added and mixed thoroughly. Afterwards, the mixture is shaped using either a wire cutter or a mould.
Once shaped, the Linking Words
bricks
are placed in a drying oven, where they are heated for 24 to 48 hours. The dried Use synonyms
bricks
are Use synonyms
then
transferred to a kiln, where they are Linking Words
initially
heated at moderate temperatures (200–980°C) before the temperature is increased to 1300°C. Linking Words
Following
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this
, the Linking Words
bricks
pass through a cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. The final stage involves packaging the Use synonyms
bricks
for transportation and subsequent use.Use synonyms
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