The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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The diagram illustrates the process of extracting
clay
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and its subsequent use in producing
bricks
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for construction purposes.
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, brick production consists of seven main stages, starting with the mining of
clay
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and concluding with the packaging of the final products and their distribution to consumers. The process begins with the excavation of
clay
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using a digger. The extracted
clay
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is
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placed into a metal grid and passed through a roller, where sand and water are added and mixed thoroughly. Afterwards, the mixture is shaped using either a wire cutter or a mould. Once shaped, the
bricks
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are placed in a drying oven, where they are heated for 24 to 48 hours. The dried
bricks
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are
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transferred to a kiln, where they are
initially
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heated at moderate temperatures (200–980°C) before the temperature is increased to 1300°C.
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, the
bricks
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pass through a cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. The final stage involves packaging the
bricks
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for transportation and subsequent use.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words clay, bricks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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