You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • describe the problem • say how long it has been a problem • explain what action you want the neighbour to take

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Dear Mr. John, Hope you're doing well. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction

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noise

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that is

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coming from your house. Actually, the

noise

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is of dog bark. He

statred

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started

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barking during

mid-night

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midnight

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. which is

effecting

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affecting

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my personal and

work-life

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work life

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. I am not able to sleep

promply

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properly

promptly

, during the whole day I

felt

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sleepy which is

impacting

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negative

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a negative

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effect on my work duties.

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, I noticed

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issue

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a week ago. Intially I avoid by thinking that the dog might be sick.

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, I do not want to

distrub

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disturb

you.

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, being a good neighbour I want to solve

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matter which

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me to write you a letter. To address the problem, I would like to suggest some measures.

Firstly

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dog

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the dog

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could be kept inside the house during

night time

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nighttime

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noise

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proff

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proof

windows and doors could be installed to make sure

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is not going out of the house. I hope these suggestions can help to solve

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hurdle. Looking forward to

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good

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relationship in the future. Yours sincerely. Waris

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punctuation

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grammar

Ensure all sentences are grammatically correct for better clarity.

task response

The letter addressed all the points mentioned in the task prompt.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.

task response

Suggestions for resolving the issue are practical and considerate.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • describe the problem • say how long it has been a problem • explain what action you want the neighbour to take

The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising but not the real need of society where such products are sold. Do you agree or disagree?

some people think that it is more eﬀective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many feel that the common educational system of teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050. Do you agree with this view? Give your opinion.

The funds for postgraduate research are limited; therefore some people think that the government should provide financial support. In their opinion, only scientific research should be funded, rather than other less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?