The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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data illustrates the fraction of GDP attributed to the IT and service industries, in the UK during the period from 1992 to 2000.
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, both components
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observed
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substantial growth over
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the increase in the IT's share of the GDP is bigger compared to that of the service industry. The IT industry made up just above 6% of
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GDP back in 1992,
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figure increased by about 2% in 1994,
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after which
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exhibited for the following two years. A major rise
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occurred
after pushing the values to reach over 16% in 2000, 10% higher
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the start.
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, the service industry experienced a much slower growth trend, starting at 4% in 1992 and reporting minor elevations since, reaching a peak in 2000 with around 8%, double what the share was in 1992, but only 4% total increase.
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