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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the frequency with which individuals in the United States consumed fast
food
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 at restaurants
since
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from
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 2003
untill
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until
 2013.
Overall
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, the majority of U.S. residents tended to eat fast
food
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 once or twice a month or once a week.
In contrast
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, a smaller proportion of the population either consumed fast
food
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 daily or never ate it at all.
To begin
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 with, in all
of
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apply
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three years, people who
favor
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favour
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to consume
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consuming
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 fast
food
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 once
in
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apply
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a week were the highest
while
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, individuals who lo

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequency
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • stabilize
  • decline
  • highlight
  • reduction
  • reliance
  • eating habits
  • population segment
  • weekly basis
  • rarely
  • initial decrease
  • dine
  • establishments
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