Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office building. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
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the design
on
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of
building
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buildings
cities
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both advantages and disadvantages.
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discuss
of
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apply
cities
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to make Wrong verb form
try
code
for Fix the agreement mistake
codes
building
to make their Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
identitiy
well known, Correct your spelling
identity
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that is
will give a city a constant Verb problem
which
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, Correct your spelling
pattern
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and identitiy
identitiy
, and will make it less eye strain. Correct your spelling
identity
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example
we have Add a comma
example,
a new
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a new city
new cities
cities
in Saudi Arabia named Alula, and NEOM where the Use synonyms
govement
worked hard to make Correct your spelling
government
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an identitiy
identitiy
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identity
foe
each one of them when you go to Alula for Correct your spelling
for
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you will find a clear contorld design for Replace the word
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building
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the Correct your spelling
controlling
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will lead to Correct your spelling
design
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restraining
the
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apply
colors
, angles, and to be inbox thinking. they usually showed examples of some Change the spelling
colours
cities
with Use synonyms
a
creative civilized engineers who think outside the box, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
bulid
some upside Correct your spelling
build
buldingis
, remarkable museums, and Correct your spelling
buildings
building
unbeliviable
stadiums, Correct your spelling
unbelievable
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instance
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instance,
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a unique stadium for Correct your spelling
built
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the world
world cup
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World Cup
this
stadium Linking Words
belong
to Gulf country named Qatar in the middle of Change the verb form
belongs
desert
, and Add an article
the desert
a desert
that is
what I think the best to think Linking Words
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the rules, be Correct your spelling
beyond
a
creative.
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apply
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a city
cities
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controlled
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nevertheless
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nevertheless,
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controlling
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apply
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of creativity.Correct your spelling
planet
paint
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