You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ● ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ● ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,
Dear Pat,
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of great work done. I heard from Nancy that you have recently signed up a charity group at some upcoming festival. I was very curious about what is it all about , so, I just decided to write Correct quantifier usage
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You must know what your responsibilities are going to involve, Can you tell me the details of it and if it is something that I can join you Change the punctuation
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coherence cohesion
The letter overall is coherent and easy to follow, but consider introducing more connective phrases or transitional words to enhance the flow between the sections.
task achievement
Clarify 'a charity group at some upcoming festival' by specifying if this means your friend is part of a group or organizing one. It adds clarity and achieves full task response.
task achievement
The letter addresses all the key points required: type of festival, responsibilities, and inquiry about volunteering opportunities.
task achievement
There's a warm and friendly tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for communication with a friend.
coherence cohesion
Greeting and closing are appropriately included, adding a personalized touch to the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,