The charts below show energy sources in Australia in 2008 and predictions for 2030.

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sources

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of energy in Australia in the period of 2008 and 2030.

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coil was the largest energy

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in 2008,

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Oil is the most source available in 2030.

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, wind and Hydro

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the lowest

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in 2008 and 2030.

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with oil, in 2008 the percentage of oil was 32,50%,

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, the figure will

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slightly to 35,50 ill 2030.

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, there will be a considerable rise in the

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percentage

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from about 22,40% in 2008 to 32,00% in 2030.

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, There will be a significant climb in the figures

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each energy

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of solar which is geothermal, wind and hydro from 0.80%, 0.30% and,0.20 respectively in 2008 to 4,30%, 0,90% , and 0,70% respectively in 2030.

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, the proportion of coal will decline

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from just 34,00% by 2008 to 22,30% by 2030.

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in both years with figures of 4.30%.