Some people believe that time spent on television and computer games can valuable for children. Other believe this has negative impact on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Debates have sparked around the benefits and drawbacks of the big screen since it became widely

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available

and easily accessible. Some opponents argue that the device can be

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detrimental

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,

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others assert the opposite. In

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essay, we will

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address

both arguments before presenting my stance. On one hand, the proponents argue that the presence of televisions in households

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countless advantages. The primary and main advantage is offering the young generation a window into the world; as they can admire historical buildings in various parts of the world,

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watch wild exotic animals in jungles and

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savannas

, or be entertained by colourful educational cartoons within the comfort of their homes.

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, growing up,

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used to watch scientific shows simplified and catered to

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. These shows banalised scientific

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and made me not only appreciate physics

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but

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understand the subject in ways no teacher has ever done before.

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, the opponents assert that despite it being helpful in many cases; flat screens can

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cause

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of harm. The disadvantages stem from the harmful effect television can have on

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's health, whether it be physical health or mental health.

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, many clinical studies and

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have been centred around the effects of television on the eye-sight of the youth - and depending on the distance and the duration - many have found that the bright lights from the device can not only

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myopia but

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cause

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astigmatism.

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, a countless number of programs can be deemed as

children

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inappropriate and in turn

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psycological

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psychological

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. To prevent

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, some programs ask for

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discretion and present age restrictions;

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, unless an adult is present, these terms can not be enforced.

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exposing young innocent souls to hurtful and harmful content. In conclusion, both sides present valuable arguments and powerful

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issue. From my perspective,

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believe that it can be

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advantageous

for the

children

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to sit in front of what once used to be called the black box, but the sessions must be short in time,

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viewer has to keep a reasonable distance from the device, and

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the program needs to be age-appropriate.