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The maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.

The maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.
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The maps illustrate the changes in the
floor
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 plan of a trade conference
venue
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 between 2009 and 2010.
Overall
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, several sections have been either replaced or relocated, including the meeting room, seating
area
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, and
concert
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hall
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,
while
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 the registration
area
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 and main entrances remained unchanged.
Additionally
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, a new lounge
area
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 was introduced near the balcony in 2010. In 2009, the
concert
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hall
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 was located on the left
side
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 of the
floor
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 plan, with rows of seats positioned in front of it. Adjacent to the
concert
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hall
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, there was a meeting room situated in the bottom-left corner. Opposite the
concert
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hall
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, a large display
area
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 was located in the
center
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centre
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 of the
venue
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, with the exhibition
area
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 positioned directly behind it. The registration desk was placed near the top middle of the
floor
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, nestled between the main and
side
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 entrances,
while
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 the balcony
area
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 occupied the far-right
side
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 of the
venue
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. By 2010, several significant changes had been made to the
floor
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 plan.
Firstly
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, the meeting room was removed, and the seating
area
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 was relocated to the right
side
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 of the
concert
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hall
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.
Furthermore
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, the balcony
area
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 was revamped and transformed into a lounge section.
Moreover
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, the exhibition
area
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 located at the bottom of the
venue
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 in 2009 was removed to make space for a new
concert
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hall
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 with
stage
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words floor, venue, area, concert, hall, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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