29DEC----The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart depicts the variation in the proportion of children aged 11-16 commuting to

school

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in the UK over the course of one year.

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, it can be seen that the percentage of students

walked

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who walked

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to

school

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decreased as the

distance

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increased,

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the proportion of car and bus users increased with longer

journey

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journeys

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. Starting at around 90% of children aged 11 to 16, the percentage of those walking to the

school

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declined gradually, reaching 25% when

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school

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the school

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was located 2-5

miles

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away. Meanwhile, bicycle use peaked at a

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1

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-2

miles

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, with over 75% of students using bicycles. At a

distance

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less than 1 mile and 2-5

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, the rate of bicycle users showed a narrow gap, both at nearly a half.

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, the remaining two modes of transportation exhibited an upward trend as the

distance

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to

school

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increased. Bus usage skyrocketed from 10% at 1-2

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to 50% at 2-5

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and

further

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to 70% at distances over 5

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.

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, car use rose slightly, rising from 10% at 0-1 mile to over 25% for journeys of more than 2

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.