The diagrams below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps present how the ground floor of a library was redeveloped from 2001 until 2009.
Overall
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, there are many new book
collections
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from some sections. Despite several
collections
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was decreased. The things that do not change all the time are the Front Desk and Stairs.
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, in 2001, There were only 4 spaces for book
collections
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such
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as Self Help, History, Newspaper and Periodicals, and
also
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Fiction. It had 8 square-shaped tables for people who wanted to spend their time in the library,
then
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, the librarian's desk exactly in front of the entrance.
Moreover
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, there were huge changes in the library in 2009. Some
collections
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were added,
in addition
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, to Kitchen, Economics, Law, and Children's book, but Self Help, Fiction and History quantity decreased. Meanwhile, the Newspaper area disappeared, and Computers and the Children's area were built. And
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, the table shape was changed into a rectangle shape and the quantity receded to just 4 sets.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words collections with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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