The diagrams below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps present how the ground floor of a library was redeveloped from 2001 until 2009.

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, there are many new book

collections

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from some sections. Despite several

collections

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was decreased. The things that do not change all the time are the Front Desk and Stairs.

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, in 2001, There were only 4 spaces for book

collections

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such

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as Self Help, History, Newspaper and Periodicals, and

also

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Fiction. It had 8 square-shaped tables for people who wanted to spend their time in the library,

then

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, the librarian's desk exactly in front of the entrance.

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, there were huge changes in the library in 2009. Some

collections

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were added,

in addition

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, to Kitchen, Economics, Law, and Children's book, but Self Help, Fiction and History quantity decreased. Meanwhile, the Newspaper area disappeared, and Computers and the Children's area were built. And

last

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, the table shape was changed into a rectangle shape and the quantity receded to just 4 sets.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words collections with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

157 words

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