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The chart below show global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below show global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the data about the global revenues of some prominent mobile phone brands from 2009 to 2013. From an
overall
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 look, it is manifested that global sales of almost all the companies experienced an upward trend throughout the period, except for Nokia and LG.
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, Samsung was observed to become the most successful trader,
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 the opposite was true for the case of ZTE. Delving into
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 detail, it is evident that
initially
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, Samsung sold its products for an impressive amount of around 225
million
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, continuingly climbing up to a little above 300
million
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 in 2011, and eventually reaching its peak at exactly 450
million
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 after 2 years.
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, the sales of Apple began at a low start of approximately 25
million
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, rising to almost 100
million
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, and standing at 150 products in millions by 2013. There was
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 a similar trend in the business of ZTE, but to a much lesser extent, with a minor change from 50
million
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 to about 60
million
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. Concerning the rest, Nokia, despite having the best-selling mobile phones at the beginning, witnessed a considerable decrease, from nearly 450 products in millions falling by almost
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half by the end of the period.
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, the figure for LG was of the same situation, but a negligible difference, with around 125
million
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 at the start and declining to the vicinity of 65
million
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 at
last
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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