The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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of enquiries that the

Touris

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Tourist

Information Office received in 2011,through three different approaches, which are in

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,by letter/email,or by telephone in one particular city,over 6 months starting from

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and ending in

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,it is very evident from the line graph that the

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received

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of enquiry was in

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,as the

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enquires

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experienced a sharp increase over the

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of time.

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least

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used to submit an enquiry was by letter or email,as the line shows a decline over the time

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enquires

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received by telephone gradually increased over the

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of time but not as much as the

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of

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. In

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, the least

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of

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enquires

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was received in

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, as slightly higher than 400 was received,but

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it rapidly increased

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throughout

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,where it reached more than 1800 enquiry in

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received by letter or email were more than 600 in

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but

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we can see a downward trend,where it gradually decreased to less than 400 in May, and it remained stable up to

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, the

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of

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enquires

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received by telephone

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greater than the other two forms in

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where it was

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more than 800, but

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it

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decreased to reaching exactly 800.We can

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see a sharp rise in the

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of enquiries reaching 1000 in March and

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stable up until April, after that we can see an upward trend where it reached 1600

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enquires

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in

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slightly less than

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form

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