The maps below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and 2009.

The maps below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and 2009.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and 2009.
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These two maps illustrate the
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changes during a certain time period from 2001 to 2009.
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, the library underwent a number of dramatic transformations, the most important of which are the establishment of the children's section and computers,
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shrinkage of the histary and delf hep segment. The librarian's desk
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the stairs remained at the south mast of the room throughout the period examined,
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the newspapers and periodicals were replaced with films and DVDs.
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, the tables are now. conjoined from eight square tables to how four rectangular tables.
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, computers were added below the films to ensure the playing of them.
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, the fiction area was substituted by the children's books and area. In the cast, the
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and history
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were shrunk,
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the fiction, kitchen, economics and law were
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added to cater
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growing needs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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