The bar chart gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 20.., and future projection for 2025. Summarize main features and make comparison where relavent.
The
bart
chart illustrates the income that Southland's main export has generated in 2000, 20..., and in the actual year 2025.
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bar
Overall
, the graph shows that the revenue generated by international tourism has increased over the yearsLinking Words
,
because it started Remove the comma
apply
with
8,000,000$ and it finished Change preposition
at
with
10,000,000$. Change preposition
at
In addition
, the sales of dairy products have not been regular, because in 2000 Linking Words
there
profits were 7,000,000$ and Correct your spelling
their
then
in the 2000s increased to 10,000,000 and Linking Words
finally
, in 2025 slightly decreased to 9,000,000$. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
exportion
of meat products has not been profitable, at first the income generated was 6,000,000% and it Correct your spelling
exportation
export
end it
up Wrong verb form
ended
in
5,000,000$ which means that the profits have only decreased over the years.
After taking all the details we can conclude that the only category that has Change preposition
with
have
a Change the verb form
had
progresive
increment in its profits Correct your spelling
progressive
is
international tourism, which means that there has been an increase Correct your spelling
in
of
holidaymakers Change preposition
in
comming
to the city.Correct your spelling
coming
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