The bar chart gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 20.., and future projection for 2025. Summarize main features and make comparison where relavent.

The bar chart gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 20.., and future projection for 2025. Summarize main features and make comparison where relavent.
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The
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bar
chart illustrates the income that Southland's main export has generated in 2000, 20..., and in the actual year 2025.
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, the graph shows that the revenue generated by international tourism has increased over the years
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because it started
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8,000,000$ and it finished
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10,000,000$.
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, the sales of dairy products have not been regular, because in 2000
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profits were 7,000,000$ and
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in the 2000s increased to 10,000,000 and
finally
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, in 2025 slightly decreased to 9,000,000$.
On the other hand
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, the
exportion
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exportation
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of meat products has not been profitable, at first the income generated was 6,000,000% and it
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up
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5,000,000$ which means that the profits have only decreased over the years. After taking all the details we can conclude that the only category that has
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a
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progressive
increment in its profits
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in
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international tourism, which means that there has been an increase
of
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holidaymakers
comming
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coming
to the city.
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