The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
quantity
of males and females taking part in the Olympics from 1924 to 2012. Meanwhile, the graph gives information about the total Change the quantifier
number
number
of Use synonyms
the
participants Correct article usage
apply
of
the Olympic Games throughout Change preposition
in
this
period.
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It is clear that
the Linking Words
number
of men taking part in these competitions is higher than Use synonyms
those
of women. Correct determiner usage
that
Overall
, the popularity of Linking Words
Olympic
games among Correct article usage
the Olympic
athletes
increased significantly over the period.
Looking first at the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
athletes
broken up by gender, in 1924, 3000 men participated in the Olympics, Use synonyms
while
almost none of the women did. By 1984, the total Linking Words
number
of male competitors rose by over 2000 people, as opposed to nearly 1500 females. Notably, by the end of the period, Use synonyms
this
figure soared to the level of approximately 5000 women which was just 1000 lower compared to men.
As for the general proportion of Linking Words
athletes
of both sexes, the lowest percentage of them was seen in 1924, with nearly 3000 Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
in
Olympics
, with its gradual increase by 1984 by almost 50%. Afterwards, the situation changed considerably, as the frequency of Correct article usage
the Olympics
athletes
performing in the Olympic Games skyrocketed, with the figure of between 10000 and 12000 participants.Use synonyms
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