The given bar chart indicates total spendings on health care as from percentage perspective of GDP in 12 European countires during the years of 2002, 2007 and 2012.

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The bar chart illustrates which proportions of 12 European countries’ GDP were spent on their healthcare systems at three points in time, namely 2002, 2007 and 2012.

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, it can be seen that 5 countries, specifically Denmark, Lithuania, Norway, Poland, and Ireland, decided not to change their policies in 2007.

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, their healthcare spending climbed by about 2% in 2012.

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, some rates plateaued throughout the 3 periods, including Belgium, France, Spain, and Switzerland. Their percentages remained the same at 10%, 3%, 8%, and 11% respectively.

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, there were 3 countries with different trends.

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, Luxembourg decreased its financial resources on its citizens’ well-being in the

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period only, reaching 7%.

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, the Netherlands reduced its funds continuously by 1% each period.

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, France had the most fluctuating policy.

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, it increased the percentage to 11%, coming up with the leader, Switzerland, but in 2012, the state’s healthcare spending declined by 2%. In conclusion, it is noticeable that the rates were very alike,

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, the states contributed to their citizens’ well-being almost equally.

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