The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of sunshine hours per year in three major city Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the number of sunshine hours in a

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and the average monthly temperatures in three different cities.

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, the chart shows that Sydney starts the

year

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at 25° and

slighly

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slightly

decreased

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decreases

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to 20° in July, but

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increased

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again to the same quantity of degrees in December.

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, London began at almost 10° and it rises to its hottest days in July with almost 25°, but

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those numbers go down to 10°.

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, in January, New York

has

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5° and that temperature increased

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to 30° in July, but

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it

goes

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went

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straight down to 5° in December.

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, we can see that the total number of daylight that every city has during the

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is: 1,180, in London; 2,535, in New York;

2,473

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and 2,473

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, in Sydeny. After taking all the details we can conclude that New York is the city that has the highest and the lowest

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temperatures

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it is the one that has more hours of sunshine during the

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.