The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribute on of wealth by region

The bar charts provide key information related to the distribution of residence and riches by region. The units used are the measured percentages.

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, the graph clearly shows that North America, Europe, and Rich Asia-Pacific have the highest proportion of wealth worldwide,

whereas

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the number of citizens is at the bottom. The rest of the countries are in the opposite situation, with a lack of wealth and a rise in population.

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what is shown, from the top in the highest amount of numerous was NA accounting for 35,

subsequently

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by Europe and Asia were nearly

similarly

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represented in 30.

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, China, Other Asia, India, Africa, Italian, America & Caribbean, showed a shortage in resources and a surplus in people China faced a rise in population triple exceeded the wealth,

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the rest

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