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The tables and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed

The tables and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed
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The table and pie charts provide key information about the British police expenditure between the years of 2017 and 2018. The table illustrates the sources of
money
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 and is measured in the bound currency,
while
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 the pie charts represent the
money
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 allocation. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that the sources of
money
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 income have increased from all sectors.
According to
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 what is shown in the pie charts the highest amount of
money
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 was spent on salaries (officers and staff),
whereas
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 the least amount invested throughout the years was in Technology. In terms of Buildings and transport the ratio of spent remains the same at 17%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Budget allocation
  • Revenue sources
  • National Government funding
  • Local taxes
  • Expenditure distribution
  • Salaries and wages
  • Technological investments
  • Facilities and infrastructure
  • Operational costs
  • Financial resources
  • Policing activities
  • Financial support
  • Percentage contribution
  • Human resources in policing
  • Technological advancement
  • Modern policing
  • Infrastructure needs
  • Emerging policing areas
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