Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally-friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the all wider population?
It is widely believed that cycling is one form of transportation which is safe for the environment and
also
beneficial health-wise. Despite its advantages, it is not considered the major mode of transport. Linking Words
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of suitable road conditions and the availability of Use synonyms
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is unsafe and might endanger the cyclist. Linking Words
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, these days there are more favourable public means of transportation, Linking Words
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as the metro, buses and trams, so one does not have to deal with cycling, especially when they are running late for work.
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and educating the public about the benefits of using bicycles. Governments should focus on creating safe and comfortable roads for Fix the agreement mistake
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users in order to encourage more people to delve into using them. Use synonyms
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save the environment from air and noise pollution. Linking Words
Therefore
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To conclude
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of better traffic conditions and the availability of other travelling methods are the possible reasons for the decline in Use synonyms
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usage. Use synonyms
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