The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The chart illustrates the amount of
sales
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avarage
global revenue of some media types: game software, Correct your spelling
average
CDs
and Use synonyms
DVD
or Fix the agreement mistake
DVDs
video
over Fix the agreement mistake
videos
spicified
time frame.
Replace the word
a specific
Overall
, There was increasing in Linking Words
trend
of DVDs/video and Games Add an article
the trend
a trend
softwere
over the given period Correct your spelling
software
opposet
to Correct your spelling
opposite
opposed
CDs
which had Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a downwared
downwared
trend. Correct your spelling
downward
CDs
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was
the highest Verb problem
had
sales
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while
Games Software was the lowest.
in terms of CD, in 2000, it started at above %30bn, which was the peak of all Linking Words
catogares
followed by Correct your spelling
categories
nigligate
decrease to 2003. The second highest Correct article usage
a nigligate
sales
were DVDs and videos , which Use synonyms
start
at just under $20bn, Wrong verb form
started
then
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it
dramatically rose to reach Correct pronoun usage
apply
approximatelly
$30bn. Correct your spelling
approximately
Moreover
, in 2003, video and DVD revenues were a little nearly as large as Linking Words
Use synonyms
CDs
revenues which both were around $30 billion dollars.
Moving to Games apps, it had lower Fix the agreement mistake
CD
sales
compared to Use synonyms
others
items, which increased slightly, starting at $15bn and ending at just below $20bn.Correct quantifier usage
other
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, cds, bn with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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