Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for child of having a large number of toys?

Other parents prefer to buy many

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toys

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for their

kids

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, to make the children happy and

showing

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love

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to them. In

this

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essay, I will tackle the pros and cons of having a

lot

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of

toys

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.

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being a parent

especially

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for their

first born

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child, parents are glad to buy a

lot

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of things and

toys

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for their offspring. They believe that buying them many

toys

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,

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makes their

kids

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happy.

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, it's a good feeling to see your kid having a new stuff to play.

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Furthermore

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it

enhance

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the child's brain development and skills when interacting

to

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with

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a

lot

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of games.

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, one of

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the advantage

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advantage

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of it, is children can share

toys

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to

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their playmates and build their social skills towards others. From these

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toys

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toys,

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the character development of a child is growing.

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, the disadvantage of having a

lot

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of stuff is that

,

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some

kids

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wants

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affection and

love

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than

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material things. Parents should give quality time to their

offsprings

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, even though they have a

lot

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of

toys

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.

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, buying a

lot

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of material things

to

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kids

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is not a good idea.

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example

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buying

toys

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without proper time with them is not

form

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of

love

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. They will enjoy and remember it until they grow old, not the toy but how, the way, and

experience

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to get

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of getting

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these

toys

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. In conclusion, having

a

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right balance to buy

stuffs

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stuff

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, should be

limit

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, having a

lot

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of

toys

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is not considered

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if

thre

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there

is no comfort,

love

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, and guidance from their guardians.