The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.

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The maps provide key information about the transformation preserved in a small local museum and its surroundings between 1957 and 2007.

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, it is clear from the map that the museum has undergone substantial redevelopment, with several physical features either transformed or relocated.

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, the 1957 layout was surrounded by the nature Garden,

whereas

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the updated layout of 2007 has a smaller garden.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

64 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

renovation
architectural trends
landscaping
infrastructure
civic development
cultural hub
heritage conservation
urban planning
visitor amenities
sustainability efforts
technological integration
aesthetic appeal
community engagement
accessibility improvements
pedestrian-friendly

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