The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The chart illustrated data
of
international sales of gaming Change preposition
on
software
, Use synonyms
CDs
and Use synonyms
DVD
/Use synonyms
Video
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
DVD
/Use synonyms
Video
showed Use synonyms
remain
growth, Wrong verb form
remaining
as well as
Linking Words
games
Use synonyms
software
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, a gradual decrease Linking Words
seem
Change the verb form
seems
at
Change preposition
in
CDs
. Use synonyms
According
the information, the highest sales belonged Add the preposition
According to
Use synonyms
CDs
over the period that rose Change preposition
to CDs
peak
which Fix the infinitive
to peak
are
35 Wrong verb form
was
Use synonyms
billions
in 2000. Change to singular
billion
In contrast
, the lowest selling Linking Words
demonstrated
at Add a missing verb
is demonstrated
games
Use synonyms
software
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, there was Linking Words
significant
gap between Add an article
a significant
CDs
and other items Use synonyms
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
was
nearly 17 Change the verb form
were
Use synonyms
billions
for Change to singular
billion
DVD
/Use synonyms
Video
and 23 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
billions
for Change to singular
billion
games
Use synonyms
software
. Use synonyms
However
, over the period Linking Words
this
number fallLinking Words
2
Change preposition
by 2
Use synonyms
billions
regarding Change to singular
billion
DVD
/Use synonyms
Video
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
. gap Linking Words
among
Change preposition
between
CDs
and Use synonyms
games
Use synonyms
software
was diminished little.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
DVD
/Use synonyms
Video
indicated approximately 22 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
billions
in 2000 and Change to singular
billion
this
score reached 32% in 2003. Selling of Linking Words
Games
Use synonyms
software
increased over the years and Use synonyms
it
rose Correct pronoun usage
apply
10
Change preposition
from 10
Use synonyms
billions
to 18 Change to singular
billion
Use synonyms
billions
respectively. Change to singular
billion
CDs
lost their high Use synonyms
sells
numbers Correct your spelling
sales
around
3% and in three years they remained Change preposition
by around
33
Change preposition
at 33
Use synonyms
billions
.Change to singular
billion
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Vocabulary: Replace the words software, cds, dvd, video, games, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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