There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The plan shows the comparison of the organization of Paradise

Island

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in the past and the present.

Overall

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, is appreciated that the land has been modified in order to

being

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be

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accesible

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accessible

for tourism. Taking a look at the first image, is noticeable that the main purpose of

traveling

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travelling

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there was to investigate as the only building was a scientific research station

in

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on

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the left side, a little pier

for

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to

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 facilitate

the

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apply

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access to it and the rest was completely virgin with a natural spring on the opposite side of the

island

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. Now focusing on the other map it is noticeable that the interests have changed as there is no longer a research station, it has been replaced by a hotel complex with a round swimming pool on the

northest

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northeast

northwest

side of that building.

In addition

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, the wild jungle has been deforested

for constructing

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to construct

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a small path that connects the hotel with the restaurant, next to it there is now a BBQ area.;

also

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, close to the natural spring there is a cafe.

Moreover

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, a cycle path

is surrounding

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surrounds

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the

island

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, which leads to the rocks and the scenic lookout on the right top, and just on top of the

hotel

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hotel,

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there is a beach with a swimming permitted area.

As a consequence

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of the touristification, the pier has been rebuilt so as to be able to fit longer boats like cruises.

To sum up

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, the upgrades that have been made to the

island

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are because of

economical

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economic

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interests as all of the improvements have been made so as to their satisfaction.