The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

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sugar

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from

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cane By and large, the majority of steps are taking place indoors.

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the first two steps only happen at the plantation fields Obviously, after cultivation

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take

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between 1

-

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1.5

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years

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sugar

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cane to be

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grown. The harvesting process will achieved either by agricultural

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or by human efforts.

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, the

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cane will be transferred to be crushed in order to fain juice.

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, the juice will be purified by

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filter. After that

heating

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the juice

by

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evaporator

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an evaporator

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to change it to

syrpe

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serve

. The next step will be the centrifuge,

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that

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is essential

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for separating

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sugar

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crystals from

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the syrup

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.

Finally

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,

sugar

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powder will be ready for consumption after cooling and drying.