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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps
that
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provided below, give information about the status of an island before and after the construction of some
tourists
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tourist
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facilities
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.
Overall
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, there were happened number of changes
in
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on
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 the island which were mainly
in
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on
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west
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the west
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side
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.
Linking Words
Also
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Also,
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 they built
up
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lots of houses
such
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 as accommodations and some
facilities
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 to provide services for tourists.
Moreover
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,
common
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the common
a common
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 thing is none of the trees
cutted
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cut
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 down for these constructions.
In
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On
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west
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the west
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side
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, the beach
turned
Verb problem
became
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 available to swim and they added
new
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a new
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 footpath to easily reach there from accommodations. As I mentioned before, they constructed many houses that
use
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are used
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 for staying next to the new restaurant and reception
facilities
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.
Additionally
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, these
facilities
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surrounded
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are surrounded
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 by new roads for vehicles to make better
connection
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connections
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 to
pier
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the pier
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 and accommodations.
In
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On
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east
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the east
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side
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,
the
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they
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 constructed a new
faschinating
Correct your spelling
fascinating
 pier for sails and more sea events.
Moreover
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, they
also
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 built
up
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apply
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brand new
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brand-new
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 houses.
However
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, beyond that place, they did not make any changes
in
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on
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 that
side
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 of the island.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, moreover".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words facilities, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • before and after
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • natural features
  • network of cottages
  • footpaths
  • recreational areas
  • pristine environment
  • organized lodging facilities
  • strategically positioned
  • delineated pathways
  • untouched nature
  • accessibility
  • isolated island experience
  • enhanced transportation options
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