You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: – explain your situation – describe your problems – tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Jacob, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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letter in regard to update you that

due to

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a family emergency, I will not be able to move in next month.

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, I believe that you can expect me in early March. I woke up with the tragic news that my grandmother had passed away

last

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night, I was extremely close to her so I felt it was my duty to perform all the rituals properly which,

according to

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Hindu mythology, would get her free from the infinite circle of life. As of now I have not booked a return ticket but rest assured that you will see me the following month. I am looking forward to moving as soon as I possibly can. I apologise for any discomfort

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may have caused, and I will be updating you on any future diversions if they occur. Sincerely. Akash Pipal

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single idea to improve clarity.

task achievement

Make sure all aspects of the situation and future plans are covered thoroughly to enhance completeness.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear logical structure, with a good balance between details and brevity.

task achievement

The tone is very suitable and polite, maintaining an appropriate relationship with the landlord.

coherence cohesion

The letter opens and closes with appropriate greetings and sign-off, ensuring pleasant communication.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: – explain your situation – describe your problems – tell him/her when you think you can move in

Topic. In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages ?

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