The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented bar chart compares data about how many movies were produced by 5 various countries from 2007 to 2009.

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, it was important that the trends of producing films in

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B and

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C increased over the period of 2 years.

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the diagram,

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A, the main area that produced the highest number of movies at all time, hit nearly 85 in the beginning;

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it's score stabilized until 2008;

however

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, it reduced slightly to just over 75 in 2009.

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B, the second one in the films sector, scored 50 between 2007 and 2008;

thereafter

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, it climbed moderately to roughly 70 in 2009. The graph demonstrates that at the start,

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C reported almost 5 after that, it rose somewhat to nearly 20 in 2009.

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D touched roughly 15 in 2007;

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it declined to the minimum point of almost 10;

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, it grew fractionally to the same number as in 2007.

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E recorded approximately 10 in 2007;

then

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it was constant until 2009.

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The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Some peole say that too much time and resources are spent on the protections of wild animmals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?