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The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart compares data about how many movies were produced by 5 various countries from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of producing films in
Country
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 B and
Country
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 C increased over the period of 2 years.
According to
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 the diagram,
Country
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 A, the main area that produced the highest number of movies at all time, hit nearly 85 in the beginning;
then
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 it's score stabilized until 2008;
however
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, it reduced slightly to just over 75 in 2009.
Country
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 B, the second one in the films sector, scored 50 between 2007 and 2008;
thereafter
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, it climbed moderately to roughly 70 in 2009. The graph demonstrates that at the start,
Country
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 C reported almost 5 after that, it rose somewhat to nearly 20 in 2009.
Country
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 D touched roughly 15 in 2007;
then
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 it declined to the minimum point of almost 10;
although
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, it grew fractionally to the same number as in 2007.
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 E recorded approximately 10 in 2007;
then
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 it was constant until 2009.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Film production
  • Trends
  • Consistently
  • Significant
  • Comparisons
  • Patterns
  • Increased/Decreased
  • Analyzed
  • Anomalies
  • Industry changes
  • Economic factors
  • Cultural aspects
  • Collectively
  • Overall trend
  • Reported
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