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Plagiarism has become an urgent problem at academic institutions in many countries today. in your opinion, how does this problem affect students? What can be done to solve it? Give reasons and include any relevant examples and explanations to support your answer. Write your answer on your answer sheet

Over academic
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 institutions in many countries
takes
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 the plagiarism
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precedence
, becoming an urgent issue to solve.
In
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 my perspective,
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 has an overwhelming impact on student's
ability
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 and needs to be tackled by some approaches.
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pupil
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 will be deprived of good thinking
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 plagiarism. Copying other works means that one does not have to actively
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 his mind to consider a subject, potentially hindering some important skills to develop,
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 as deduction and problem-solving.
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, lacking creativity as a direct consequence of plagiarizing,
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 learners to retain their individuality, alongside uniqueness
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a hard way, because of the

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introduction conclusion present
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relevant specific examples
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complete response
Your essay clearly identifies a critical issue with plagiarism affecting students' skills like deduction and problem-solving.
logical structure
The essay maintains a logical progression of ideas, making it easy for readers to follow your argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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