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The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
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The bar chart provides key information about worldwide
slaes
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sales
 of the five leading mobile phone brands from 2009 to 2013. The units are measured in Units sold (
milions
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millions
).
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, it is clear from the graph that throughout the years, Samsung and Nokia
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 reached the highest
sales
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 point,
whereas
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 LG and ZTE had the lowest
sales
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.
According to
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 what is shown in 2009 Samsung reached around 250
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millions
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million
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,
while
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 in 2013
rasied
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raised
sales
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 to
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approximately
around
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350
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millions
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, but in 2013 Samsung successfully reached the highest peak of
sales
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 up to almost 470
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.
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, Apple
sales
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 were so low, where it started in 2009 with nearly 50
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millions
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million
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,
then
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 gradually increased to
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almost 100
miliion
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million
 in 2011. Apple
sales
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 in 2013
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 to
be
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around 150
milliom
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million
. In terms of Nokia
sales
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 were the highest among other brands, they
manged
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managed
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 to sell around 450 mobiles in 2009 and in 2011 slightly dropped to
near
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 420, but in 2013 Nokia
sales
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dramaticly
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dramatically
 dropped to
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nearly
around
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250. LG
sales
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 began
with
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 almost 130
then
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 fluctuated in 2011 and 2013.
On the other hand
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, ZTE has the lowest
sales
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 in the illustration never
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a
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100
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millions
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million
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 over the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global sales
  • Mobile phone brands
  • Market share
  • Trends
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Technological advancements
  • Innovation
  • Consumer preferences
  • Demographics
  • Market dominance
  • Brand loyalty
  • Comparative analysis
  • Sales figures
  • Data interpretation
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