IELTS 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel
The table shows the data for the mean length in
miles
of some transport used by the British in the two years 1985 and 2000.
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, the most favourite type of transportation both in 1985 and 2000 was the car. There was Linking Words
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a significant surge in total distance recorded by all transportation types.
In 1985, the car was dominating any others how Linking Words
the
people using a kind of transportation with the number of average travel distance of 3,199 Correct article usage
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miles
per capita in a year. The same condition Use synonyms
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occurred in the next fifteen years when the most used vehicle was Linking Words
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a car with a, quite significant rise to 4,806 Linking Words
miles
/people/year.
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In addition
, the lowest number was recorded for taxis back in 1985. There was a shifting trend of the least people used for travelling using bicycle. Linking Words
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, the total distance in Linking Words
miles
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the public travelled yearly in 1985 was lower compared to 2000 data with 4,740 and 6,475 respectively.Change preposition
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