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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map depicts two possible sites for the new
school
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 in Canterbury.
Overall
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, the first place is located a little bit away from the centre;
however
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, the second place is in the middle of the town. On the one hand, the first place of the planned
school
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 project is located north-east side of Canterbury which is 5 km from Sturry.
This
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school
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 might be suitable for the 7000 people who live in the countryside.
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 the northern-west side of the town, there is a university and the main road passes from the vicinity of the
school
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. But it is quite far from the residential area of the west side.
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, the second plan is to build a new
school
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 in the centre of the town where there is no traffic. It
also
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 will be located South of the university. From that planned area there will be laid the main road to Cartham which
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km away. Compared to the Sturry population Chartham population merely consist of 4500 people. The location of the
school
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 should be more suitable for people who reside around the city centre.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • accessibility
  • proximity
  • town centre
  • site
  • amenities
  • proposed development
  • population distribution
  • environmental impact
  • traffic congestion
  • community needs
  • educational facilities
  • public transport
  • recreational areas
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