The given bar charts illustrate the amount of money in million euros which MG Entertainment profited from divergent categories in three European nations in 1997 and 2007.

The given bar charts illustrate the amount of money in million euros which MG Entertainment profited from divergent categories in three European nations in 1997 and 2007.
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The bar charts depict MG Entertainment's total profit in
million
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euros
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gained by various categories in Britain,
France
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, Italy, and Germany during 1997-2007.
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, Britain became the most attractive branch in every category
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as photographic film, toys, CDs, perfumes, tennis racquets, and personal stereos.
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the data, compared to the other nations which were up and down relatively, Britain tended to be stable on average with more than 155
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euros
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.
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, Germany was the poor one which remained under 150
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euros
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in every category. The data
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addressed that
France
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and Italy were competitive countries.
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, in the Photographic film,
France
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occupied second place with 165
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euros
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,
while
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in the tennis racquets category only had revenue of 145
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euros
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, putting them in the lowest rank. In the meantime, Italy was not as sad as
France
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and Germany. Even though Italy had never been the dominant, it was never the latter as well.
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