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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The line graph displays the proportion of Australian
exports
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and
 products
inJapan
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in Japan
,
US
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the US
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, China and India from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
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, Australian products had the highest
exports
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 to China over the entire
period
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,
while
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 the least amount of products was exported to the other three nations. In 1990, the percentage of
exports
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 to China was very low, at around 3%.
This
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 figure gradually increased over the next fifteen yearsAustralia's highest
exports
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 were to Japan in the initial year, at just above 26%.
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,
this
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 figure gradually declined over the whole
period
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, reaching just under 20% in 2012 to approximately 20%, and
then
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 rapidly rose to a peak of about 26% in 2012. The number of
exports
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 to the USA fluctuated over the whole
period
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, ranging roughly between 10% and 8% from the start of the
period
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 to 2012.Australia's lowest
exports
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 were to India in 1990, at around 0.1%.
This
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 figure gradually increased to just under 10%, before decreasing slightly to remain under 10% in 2012

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentages
  • exports
  • trend
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • economic ties
  • demand
  • decline
  • recovery
  • policy changes
  • trade relationship
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • temporary surge
  • specific events
  • incentives
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