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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph displays the proportion of Australian
exports
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and
 products
inJapan
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in Japan
,
US
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the US
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, China and India from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
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, Australian products had the highest
exports
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 to China over the entire
period
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,
while
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 the least amount of products was exported to the other three nations. In 1990, the percentage of
exports
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 to China was very low, at around 3%.
This
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 figure gradually increased over the next fifteen yearsAustralia's highest
exports
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 were to Japan in the initial year, at just above 26%.
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,
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 figure gradually declined over the whole
period
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, reaching just under 20% in 2012 to approximately 20%, and
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 rapidly rose to a peak of about 26% in 2012. The number of
exports
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 to the USA fluctuated over the whole
period
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, ranging roughly between 10% and 8% from the start of the
period
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 to 2012.Australia's lowest
exports
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 were to India in 1990, at around 0.1%.
This
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 figure gradually increased to just under 10%, before decreasing slightly to remain under 10% in 2012
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentages
  • exports
  • trend
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • economic ties
  • demand
  • decline
  • recovery
  • policy changes
  • trade relationship
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • temporary surge
  • specific events
  • incentives
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